The last Dance

It looks like you have a very good English !
I love this text. It is very poetic.
Could you please write some more ?

@ Zoubi : I always loved to learn my vocabulary at school, and eventually it's quite useful !! :DD

@ Everybody : You can fine this Poem is the "Poem of Zoubi & Sydney " 's topic. Maybe we should have only one topic for reviews... :/
Sorry, Hestia, if we should !

Well, we have talked about the increasing proliferation of subjects in this section and Sydney has agreed to share a topic with me...
Of course I hope the reviews will concern both my and her poems...